“I Don’t Know How You Know…”

“I don’t know you you know…”

That’s the question that a kid asked me this week about my new work in progress.  Such a funny question.  Nobody has ever asked me that before.

Let’s take a step back…

How do I know that my main character is obsessed with Slim Jim’s?  Well, it just seems to be an obvious choice.  What’s most interesting to me is the notion of putting yourself in a world, then seeing everything through that person’s reality.  Love that! You can be whoever you want on any given day.

For instance, take a sixteen year old boy looking at nail polish.  He’d be clueless.  He might say something like, “Why do you keep all that polish nail stuff.”  Just by showing how he perceives it tells the reader that he doesn’t care or even have a clue about something as simple as nail polish.  Honestly, why would he know? Unless he’s obsessed by straight shiny toenails.  Maybe this character has a little toe fetish.  That would liven things up.

Though,  every idea comes from some sort of experience, whether we realize it or not.  Yes, fiction is fiction, but inspiration is learned.

photoI’m like really simple scenes.  Like this back door.  I love the colors and the shiny MacBook in the corner of this picture.  It says so much about the people who live here.  But, I could see all sorts of characters walking out that door…

(Oh, I could go on…)

photoA simple drink makes me want to write something.  I’d especially like to have a linebacker from the NFL’s  face light up when he sees that cherry floating on top.  It actually reminds me of a night out in DC long ago, when men in suits all around me ordered these girly drinks, and then ended up crying about this and that (I bring it out in people, trust me).  Should’ve brought tissues out that night.  Really, who knew?

photoWhat people chose to wear inspires my writing.   A simple hat can say a lot about a character.   It might be wanting to preserve a lily white face.  Or maybe this character is just a larger than life soul that she wants to hold up more space in the universe.   When I wear a hat, it’s to be invisible. It rarely works.

So how do you know what to write? I’m not really sure, but I do know that life is pretty interesting.  Isn’t it?

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A Lobster Trap!

IMG_6104Oh summer in Maine…

My neighborhood turns into a hotbed of activity after Memorial Day.  The streets move from people you know, to wandering tourists searching for bagels or the beach.  Sometimes people seemed dazed and confused in their search for lighthouse satisfaction.  In these cases I want to give them water and make them sit for a bit, but they trudge off,  heading to greater sites than my street corner.

With the rise of cruise ship industry, comes the rise of the lighthouse tour.  These busses are huge on our tiny streets, like little boats themselves actually.  They lumber past my house, packed full of tourists taking it all in.  Sometimes they actually point at us sitting on our front porch, like we are part of the attraction or something.  I can almost hear them yelling, “Look! A local!”

That’s why I’ve devised a plan for my own personal amusement.  I call it–The Lobster Trap.  This is not what you’re thinking.  It doesn’t actually involve a trap, but a simple plastic lobster left over from my last year’s writing retreat.  I set that lobster a corner of my yard, tucked  between the hostas and day lilies.  Then I watch as the tour buses come around the corner.

I wait for it. Then I almost hear somebody yell, “Look,  a lobster is climbing that tree!”

The whole bus whips to attention and actually comes to life before my very eyes.

That’s good Vacationland fun.

Right?

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Tulips, Hives, and Paranoia.

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Did you think that this post was about tulips? It’s not.  I just put them there so you’d click on my pretty picture.  Got you, didn’t I?  Well now that you are here you might as well buckle up for my hives story.

First, let’s flashback to 1975.  I want you to imagine a pudgy little blond wearing a rocking bright red and yellow sundress.  It was tight on the top with a bottom that would flair if you spun fast.  Which was exactly what I was doing when my neighbor told me that I looked like I was on fire.

Now, let’s be clear–my father was a firefighter.  Fire was bad.  Very bad.  I think it was the last time I wore that dress, ever.

Flash forward to last week.  I’m cruising around the grocery store.  Out of nowhere, I think that I just may be on fire.  I’m not kidding.  My whole torso felt like it was being bitten by miniature fire ants.  The fire ants were loving it.  It was like a party.  It was like a fire ant Fourth of July celebrations.

No, things were not going well.  I peered down my shirt, trying to analyze the situation.  I was sly.  I’d pull my shirt out and take a little peak.  Then I pulled further.  I think at one point my head was completely under my shirt. What I found there was shocking.  HIVES!  Big molten hives attacking every square inch of skin.

Classic really.

Flash forward to this past Sunday.  I’m wearing my new orange and red dress (bought in memory of that childhood dress).  It’s kind of tight on the top and flairs if you spin.  I’m back at Hannafords Grocery.  That’s when I notice people staring at me.  Now, I might be paranoid, but I’m assuming that the people were either thinking:

“That’s the chick that stuck her head down her shirt in aisle 3!”

Or…

(And this is when childhood trauma hits you hard)

“Is that girl on fire?”

Isn’t it funny how we find these patterns in our life?  The firefighter’s daughter is on fire, then on fire again, and then on fire again.

Today I’m wearing beige and carrying Benadryl.  I suggest that maybe you do the same.

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Random Squam Lake Writing Retreat Facts.

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Still on the fence about Squam Lake Writing Retreat?

Let’s dig into some more random facts…

We are the first SCBWI event ever with a morning hike!

Makings for s’mores will be delivered to your door via golf cart.

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BYOB! (That makes life easy)

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Canoes.

Squam Lake is the setting for the movie, On Golden Pond!

Loons.  You can listen for loons.

The gift of time!

Did I mention the s’mores?

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Fieldstone fireplaces

Sunny decks

A brisk fall swim

Hanging with amazing writers!

John Cusick

Did I mention the s’mores?

Sign up today!


http://squamlakewritingretreat.edublogs.org/registration/

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May.

I haven’t been here in a while.  That’s weird for me after blogging all of these years.  I bet you’re wondering what I’ve been up to.  I’m wondering that myself honestly.  In a nutshell, I’ve spent the last two weeks pondering my personal fate, hives, opportunity, organic sides of beef, lacrosse, semester’s end,  dinner, publication,  Squam Lake Writing Retreat,  the carpool…

But, that’s the beauty of life.  One minute you are writing a check for your cable company and the next you are having a drink with a friend with the most beautiful view ever.

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Slowing down would make me boring.  I’m sure of it.  I kind of like that every day is an adventure and do feel that you really don’t know what’s lurking around the next corner.

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Case and point! Look what I saw on my woods run.  It’s a story walk, an activity that was tied to my critique partner’s amazing Literacy Week in Cape Elizabeth, Maine.  Honestly, wouldn’t the world be a better place if every town had a rotating story walk?

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Spring is here.  Summer is coming.  I’ve got a month to blast out some work.

I’m starting right now.

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Interview with John Cusick of Greenhouse Literary.

IMG_5475Cameron Rosenblum and I are humbled to have such fantastic mentors for our 2013 SCBWI Squam Lake Writing Retreat that will be held this coming fall at the Rockywold Deephaven Resort in Holderness, New Hampshire.

We not only have secured editor Sarah Dotts Barley from HarperCollins, but also writers Lynda Mullaly Hunt and Scott Nash for our debut year on the small writing retreat circuit.

Rounding out this fantastic line-up is John Cusick, from the Greenhouse Literary Agency.  I’m thrilled to be here today with an interview that will outline exactly what he’s on the prowl for as a top agent and some thoughts around the Squam event.

JOHN CUSICK OF GREENHOUSE LITERARY

1.  John, what kind of a reader were you as a kid?  Do you imagine your child/ya self when you are reading manuscripts?

 I read Louis Sachar and Bruce Coville almost exclusively; I only realized a few years ago that half the books I loved as a kid were penned by these two. I also loved adult thrillers and sci-fi, like Stephen King, Patricia Cornwell, and Michael Crichton. The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy was a major fav. I guess I was drawn to zany, scary, exciting tales. As an adult I’m still drawn to that kind of thing (you can bet I went and saw Jurassic Park when it was rereleased in 3D). I’m not sure I imagine my kid self when I read manuscripts, because that part of me hasn’t disappeared, really. I still have more toys on my desk than pens. I read with the same brain that built a spaceship like the one in Aliens Ate My Homework out of my mom’s old makeup container when I was seven.

2.  Can you tell us a little about your journey to becoming an agent at Greenhouse Literary. 

I knew I wanted to work in publishing when I left school—that, or children’s public television. The two passions came together accidentally when I landed a position as an assistant at a juvenile literary agency. I instantly fell in love (or rather, re-fell-in-love) with kids books, and realized I adored being an agent, working with authors, shaping stories, and gushing about them to editors (I am, at my heart, a fanboy). I met Sarah Davies (V.P. and founder of Greenhouse) at a conference in the summer of 2012. I knew who she was by reputation, and had admired her taste from afar. What I didn’t know then was that she is also one of the warmest, most thoughtful and passionate people in the business. One thing led to another, and six months later I was Greenhouse’s man in NYC. I couldn’t be happier.

3.  What is your favorite part of the job?  Any surprises?

 I once heard an agent say “you get to the point where you can smell a good project,” and there really is a precious, invigorating shock when you begin to read a manuscript and realize this is it, I love this, even before you can quite articulate why. It’s a very subjective business, and I was surprised at first how much personal taste plays a role. You can’t be cynical about what you sell. At least in my experience, I have to be personally enthralled by a manuscript to work with its author. That deep-down-in-your-heart excitement about books, that was a surprise, and a very happy one. Also, every day is different, and I love that.

4. Squam Lake was the location used for the 80s movie ON GOLDEN POND.  In it, there is a whopper of a fish known in local lore as Walter.  Everyone tries to catch him or at least see him.  Do you have a Walter?  Is there a dream manuscript you’d love to find on your desk tomorrow morning?

 I think I do have a Walter. I think there is a big, sweeping historical or maybe fantasy series out there, something totally original, with intimate scenes and great scope. It probably looks a little like A.S. Byatt’s The Children’s Book, except for young people. Or who knows, it could be the prefect, heart-breaking realistic contemporary. I only know I’ll know it when I see it.

5.  Tell us why you’re looking forward to mentoring the SCBWI Squam Lake Writing Retreat.

 I love writing and shaping stories. I can’t wait to talk to writers about their work one-on-one, and also to give presentations. A) Teaching is fun, and B) this stuff is just interesting to me. A few days to kick around with other scribes and talk shop? I can’t wait.

6.  (If you didn’t already answer this in #4)  What are you looking to acquire now?

I’m especially hungry for middle-grade of all kinds. I’ve also just opened to picture book submissions, so the right pithy, character-driven story is high on my wish-list. I’m open to all genres, though I’m a little wary of dystopian and super-powers stories at the moment. I’d love to see a kind of Tolstoy for teens, or sci-fi in a contemporary milieu, like Children of Men or Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind.

7.  Finally, what is your advice to all the authors out there trying to get that first contract?

Write a lot, read a lot, revise a lot. Finish projects, work on them, and move on to other projects. When querying agents, do your research and follow the guidelines. Let the work speak for itself. Remember that getting published isn’t impossible. It literally happens every day, and moreover it’s just the beginning of a much longer journey. While you’re at it, pick up a copy of Writing the Breakout Novel by Donald Maass. There’s some great advice in there for writers of all kinds.

And of course: send me stuff!

Thank you, John Cusick for this great interview!  If you’d like to join us for Squam, click here.  Spaces are filling up fast!

 

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Interview With the Fabulous Sarah Dotts Barley, HarperCollins

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The SCBWI Squam Lake Writing Retreat is gearing up for its debut in September of 2013. In anticipation, we are interviewing our amazing mentors!
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Sarah Dotts Barley is an editor at the amazing HarperCollins.  We are thrilled that she’ll be joining us.
1.  What kind of a reader were you as a kid?  Do you imagine your child/ya self when you are reading manuscripts?
I was a voracious reader as a kid, but especially after my mom challenged me to read a certain number of books before I could get my ears pierced. That summer, I fell in love with reading in a whole, new, insane way, and will probably forever associate pierced ears and Amelia Bedelia! I think about myself as a child and young adult reader all the time as I read manuscripts, and ask myself questions like: Would I have been compelled to keep reading when I was eight, twelve, fourteen? Would I have wanted to read this for fun or because someone told me to? How much trouble would I be willing to get into for staying up late to finish this book? (Ideally, LOTS of trouble.)
 
2.  Can you tell us a little about your journey to becoming an editor at HarperCollins?
I grew up working at a bookstore my parents co-owned in Huntsville, Alabama, and my mom taught English at my high school. Reading and books and talking about books were always a big part of my life! I just never knew that much about publishing, though, and that it was something I could actually do for a career. I was really lucky to get my first job in the business as a sales assistant at Random House Children’s Books right after I graduated from college in North Carolina. I had AMAZING mentors at Random House—it truly was the best first job I could’ve had in children’s book publishing. I use something I learned on that job as an editor every day. After a couple of years in sales, I moved over to become an editorial assistant at Henry Holt Books for Young Readers, and then a few years after that, I met my current boss and took a job as an associate editor here at Harper. And I’ve been here very happily ever since!
 
3.  What is your favorite part of the job?  Any surprises?
My favorite part of the job has to be reading a manuscript and knowing that it’s something special, that it’s something that we absolutely have to publish. I also love the people I work with—not only our authors, but also so many of the people I see day in and day out every day in the office. This is sort of sappy, but I think I’d find it hard working at home too often, because I’d miss my pals! Since I edit mostly novels, the amount of reading I have on my plate is constantly surprising.
 
4. Squam Lake was the location used for the 80s movie ON GOLDEN POND.  In it, there is a whopper of a fish known in local lore as Walter.  Everyone tries to catch him or at least see him.  Do you have a Walter?  Is there a dream manuscript you’d love to find on your desk tomorrow morning?
One of my favorite books of all time is BEAUTY by Robin McKinley. A book with those layers of meaning for different readers (or the same readers at different stages of their lives!), with that staying power, is something I think we all dream of editing.
 
5.  Tell us why you’re looking forward to mentoring the SCBWI Squam Lake Writing Retreat.
I’m really looking forward to being with the same small group of people over a few days at a retreat, rather than meeting hundreds of folks very quickly and not really getting the chance to know anyone. And, I saw pictures of where you’re holding the retreat…I cannot wait to be there! Lastly, John is awesome and highly entertaining.
 
6.  (If you didn’t already answer this in #4)  What are you looking to acquire now?
My sweet spot is voice-driven middle grade and YA fiction of any genre, so I’m always looking to fall in love with something I didn’t even know I wanted because the voice is so  convincing and compelling. I recently read (and adored) TIMMY FAILURE, and am currently loving every minute of a very funny and surprising YA novel, A CORNER OF WHITE by Jaclyn Moriarty. So I can definitely say that I wish I saw more humorous submissions! I also love historical fantasy.
 
7.  Finally, what is your advice to all the authors out there trying to get that first contract?
To write and to keep on writing for the love of it, because you have to tell this story. Also, to read as much as you possibly can.
 
Thanks Sarah!  Once again, check out the website for the #SCBWI Squam Lake Writing Retreat!
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The Query Game.

photoI’m about to start The Query Game.

This is a very simple game.  You simply pick your player (the shiniest manuscript), and start at go.  Study the game board.  Which direction will get you to the end first?  Then ignore it.  There is no easy way to go when you are playing The Query Game.

Roll the dice.

Start moving.

Look out!

Typo.

Go back to start.

Roll the dice.

Slowly trudge forward.

Roll the dice.

Slowly trudge forward.

Bam! Stuck in the slush.  It’s sticky there.  You lose a turn or two. Then roll out.

Oh, you’ve got a request! Move ahead five.

Another request, move again.

Roll the dice again.

Send out some safety lines and hold on tight as you climb up the Mountain of Publication.  This is no hill, this is a freaking monster with peaks of doom, carnage laden paths, and rocks that can rip your guts out.

Roll the dice again.

If only the path was clear. You might need oxygen.  Look, a couple of friends up there at the top!  They are cheering you on!

I think one of them is holding a drink.  You are so parched.

Crash, back to start. Revise.  Revise some more.

Roll the dice.

Move ahead. And ahead.  This is your game. You are almost there.

Only the best of us can win The Query Game.

(KS! This one is for you!)

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Gone Quiet

IMG_6019Words got lodged in my throat last week.  I spent too much time on social media.  I obsessed about heroes.  I thought about fate, intuition, and luck.  I pondered.

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Turns out having some quiet was good for me.  I slowed down for a change.  I was a tad more present.  I took the time to be. Figuring out what your own therapy is might be one of the most useful things in the world.  I’m not good at it, but I’m trying.

photoI learned that sometimes some coffee does fix an attitude.  A good view can unlodge the words stuck in the back of your throat. Time with friends will give you the realization that while people might occasionally disappoint, the good in this world so outweighs the bad.

“You must not lose faith in humanity. Humanity is an ocean; if a few drops of the ocean are dirty, the ocean does not become dirty.”   ~Mahatama Gandhi

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The Cinderella of the Maine Coast.

photoThere are all kinds of Cinderella stories, but the premise is always the same: plain girl, fairy godmother, handsome prince, and a magical transformation.

I spent some serious brain time thinking about how the humble fried fish sandwiches is obviously the Cinderella of the Maine coast.

It is our fairy tale.

Think about it…

The piece of plain broiled haddock is the blah Cinderella.    The evil stepmother is your personal trainer, trying to hide the true beauty of what could be.  The fairy godmother is the chef who takes the plain old piece of fish, breads it, and tends to it in the deep fryer until the transformation is complete.  Then the newly crisp princess dresses in the best outfit ever-a grilled bun, swiss cheese, homemade tarter sauce, and lettuce and tomato with a side of pickles before going to the ball.

When this princess arrives at the table, the party starts, and you’ll feel like a prince eating it.

The fried fish sandwich, a Maine Cinderella story.

Author’s Note: Today’s post feels especially frivolous when there are important things going on in the world, but I’m going to post it anyways.  I’m hoping that the next time you eat a fish sandwich, you’ll give a quick nod to the fairy godmother who fried that bad boy up.  I’m starting to think life just might truly be about the beauty of simple things.  Like a good sandwich at a local diner.  This one is from Becky’s Diner in Portland.  Becky’s Diner, nothing finer!

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